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Please, if you are hurting,
let me share your pain-
I will ease away your burden,
shield you from the rain.

Please, share with me your fears,
let me hold your hand.
I will wipe away your tears,
and show you how to stand.
Because deep down inside my brain,
I have hidden my own scars;
by helping you, I ease my pain.
and break free from prison bars.

Please, if you are hurting,
let me share your pain-
I will ease away your burden,
shield you from the rain.



Benjamin Court, July 2013
I don't know. The poem says really all I need to say. I wanted to make it longer, but for the first time in a while I cannot find words to convey my feelings. Until I started writing poetry a lot, that was a problem I had all the time. Lately, I have gotten so used to just being able to flow my emotions into words when I need to, or music when I can't... But tonight I am lost again I guess.
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PoetryToTheMasses Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
This poem was featured in our weekly feature, after it was suggested by ~BeAnIndividual.

P2TM is designed to encourage more people to read and write poetry, including song lyrics, through a weekly feature: one poem or song from outside dA and one from dA itself, with information about the poems and the poets.

Please visit the page and support P2TM by watching or joining the group, suggesting poems and lyrics, :+favlove:ing the news articles, donating points or contest prizes and/or spreading the word.

Keep writing!
~PoetryToTheMasses
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BeAnIndividual Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Love this poem times a bagillion <3
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Inanisvoid Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks. :)
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001glaceonice001 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Student Artist
This is good. I really like it. :)
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Inanisvoid Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!!!
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